[x]

deviantART

 


I slightly touched my black paws into the sand. I was targeting my prey, a bird. It didn't see me, more of it couldn't. I snuck up behind it and used my claws to grab it before it could even think about flying away. I think took my other paw and roasted the bird. It was perfect. I'm able to grab food from anywhere without anyone realizing I'm there. I don't know how I got these powers, but I do know that I got them for a reason.
I have been known to be a unlucky symbol in this world. No matter where I go, I get shunned out of society. I’m just a stray. A stray that knows how to live in the outside world. No house to live in, no free food, no special grooming, the list goes on.  But how I live, kind of fits this darkness that surrounds me.
My name is Peter, and I’m no ordinary black cat. Sometimes I wonder if that means anything anymore.
©2008-2009 ~Sniper-the-spider
Details
Submitted: March 27, 2008
File Size: 1,002 bytes
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 3
Favourites & Collections: 1 [who?]

Views
Total: 220
Today: 0

Downloads
Total: 15
Today: 0

Thumb

Author's Comments

another contest entry on here. Its short since its just suppose to be for any character on heroes as any animal. I picked Peter, has you can tell from this.

Please no crit! I'm tired of it, and I'm already a depressed type or person anyways. Please don't make it worse.
[x]

Devious Comments

love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 1 1 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0

Comments


Madame, your comment troubles me, but I can see where you're coming from. Therefore, I offer only praise: the last two sentences are especially powerful. Kudos.
I'm sorry you feel that way, feeling victimized is definitely not a good feeling when you're putting up personal works. That's pretty much why I never post any writing...but anyway I apologize if I've been insulting you in any way. I can't speak for anyone besides myself though, but remember that you never really need to pay any heed to critics (cough spankers cough), and you can just put "critque discouraged" on your deviations. In any case I agree with twitchy, I like the closing sentence especially, it wraps up but also creates interest. :)

--
(i do not know what it is about you that closes
and opens; only something in me understands
the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)
nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands
e e cummings
i think its good
the only normal comment in here!!

--
DO A BARREL ROLL!

Site Map